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Each day there are much cars on roads and streets as millions of new cars are producing.One out of every six Americans works at putting together the parts of cars, driving trucks and build roads.
Americans won't live without any cars.Most Americans would find hard to think what life would be like without a car.However some realized the problems of the air pollution brought by the car.
One way to get rid the polluted air is to build a car that does not pollute.That is that some factories have been trying to do.
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Welcome to our city. Now let me to introduce our city to you. Our city is a new modern city. It set up in the early 1980s. But it has been developed very rapidly. From here you can travel to everywhere by sea, by air and by land. Recently another freeway connects with Beijing started being used. The places around our city is rich in nature resources(资源). And we have enough supply of electricity and energy resources. The public order is nice.
The government will support investors(投资者)with many ways.
We expect more foreign friend to invest in our city.
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It's easier to go downhill than climb uphill; so it's easier to fall into bad habits than into good one.
Bad habits not come suddenly. They come little by little. Schoolboys first picked up a little in school and on the streets. When they cannot do them homework, they copy from their schoolmate. If they see bigger boys smoking, they also want to learn to smoke. When they get bigger, the habits become more stronger and stronger, so that they can no longer getting rid of them. What necessary it is that we get rid of the bad habits at the beginning!
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In primary school there is nothing wrong with my eyes. But later because more and more lessons
I couldn't see as clear as before. Sometimes I even couldn't see that the teacher wrote on the blackboard. In order didn't to make things worse my parents bought me a pair of glass when I was in
the second year of junior school. It was uncomfortable to wear glasses. A month before I decided to wear contact lenses(隐形眼镜). They make me to look more beautiful but also have trouble in wearing them.
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One night when several thieves broke into Tom's house. Hurriedly they packed up his furnitures and some other things and went away. They hardly half-way across a yard when Tom caught up with him carrying some small things in his hands.
"Hello, where were you going so late at night?" one of thieves saw him and asked. "Well," said he, "I have been wanting to move for a long time and I couldn't afford a truck for my things.
This is very kind of you to help me."
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短文改错参考答案
一
1. [much 改为 many] cars 可数名词,复数。
2. [producing 改为produced] 汽车是被制造的。
3. [√]
4. [build 改为 building]与前面driving trucks 并列。
5. [去掉any] 美国人没车是没法生活的。
6. [find 后加 it] 结构为 find it hard + to do。
7. [some 后加 have] 应用现在完成时
8. [problems 改为 problem] 仅是汽车造成的空气污染,故用单数。
9. [rid 后加of] get rid of为固定短语,其后接名词。
10. [最后一个that 改为 what] what 引导表语从句,在从句中作宾语,而that 引导表语从句不但任任何成分。
二
1. [删去第二个to] 动词let后要用不带to的不定式做宾语补足语。
2. [在set up前加was] 本句中的谓语动词是一般过去时的被动语态。
3. [developed改为developing] 根据句意“我们的城市一直迅猛发展”,谓语动词要用主动语态。
4. [and改为or] and表示并列,or表示选择。根据句意,只能是其中的一种方式。
5. [connects改为connected] 本句的谓语动词是started,因此要用过去分词短语connected with的后置定语,相当于定语从句which is connected with Beijlng。
6. [is改为are] 本句的主语是The places,谓语动词要用复数。
7.[nature改为natural] natural resource表示“自然资源”。
8. [√]
9. [with改为in] in many ways表示“在很多方面”。
10. [friend改为friends] friend是可数名词,这里要用
复数。
三
1. [在than后加to] 使用比较级时,比较的双方成分应对称:不定式对不定式,动名词对动名词去分词对过去分词。
2. [one改为ones] one和ones都可用来代替前面已出现过的人或事而避免同一名词的重复使用单数时用one,复数时用ones。这里的ones指代前面的habits。
3. [not前加do或将not改为don't]
4.[picked改为pick] 本文说明的是坏习惯是如何产生的,其主体时态为一般现在时。
5. [them改为their] 这里应用形容词性物主代词,修饰homework。
6. [schoolmate改为schoolmates] 受their的限制,school-mate应用复数。
7. [√]
8. [more去掉] strong为单音节形容词,通过加-er构成比较级。
9. [getting改为get] 情态动词后跟动词原形。
10. [What改为How] 本句为感叹句。引导感叹句且修 饰动词、形容词、副词应用how。
四
1. [is改为was] 此处叙述的是过去的事。
2. [在because后加of或将because改为with] because引导一个原因状语从句,而because of是一个介词短语,后跟名词或代词。
3. [clear改为clearly] 副词clearly修饰动词see。
4. [that改为what] 文中what做wrote的宾语。请注意观察由that与what引导的名词性从句的不同,that在名词性从句中常常不作成分也无词义,没有它,名词性从句结构仍然完整。而what则不同,它在名词性从句中作主语或宾语等,没有它,从句的结构和意义就不完整。
5.[didn't改为not] 动词不定式的否定形式是在to前加not。
6. [glass改为glasses] 因为glass(眼镜)只能有复数形式。
7. [√]
8. [before改为ago] “sometime(一段时间)+before"这样的短语只用于过去完成时。“some time(一段时间)+ago"才用于一般过去时。
9. [to去掉] make后接动词原形作宾语补足语。
10. [在but之后加I] 在but引导的这个并列分句中主 语应是“I”而不是"They"(contactlenses)。
五
1. [去掉when]此处为简单句。
2. [furnitures改为furniture]作“家具”解为不可数名词,无复数形式。“一件家具”用a piece of furniture表示, “一些家具”用some furniture表示。
3. [They后加were]句子缺少系动词。
4. La改为the]此处为特指,应用定冠词。
5. Ihim改为them]them指thieves。
6. [were改为are]时态错误。
7. [of后加the]“one of the + 名词复数形式”表示“…当中之一”。
8. [√]
9. [and改为but]连词but表示意义上的转折。
10. [This改为h]h用做形式主语。